Post by Allison Harvard on May 3, 2013 17:36:10 GMT -5
Come on in, ladies! Let's see how the four of yuo did 
Emma
Allison: The strength in this photo is that there is a very clear action. That rope swing bench thingy looks hella fun and the theme is very there. But... that's about it for this photo. I'm not digging the pose, the face, everything else is weak.
Jared: This is cute and in action, nice job
Twiggy: I like the whole fun vibe I got from this photo, its energetic, it tells a story and definitely I can see the movement with the swing. But as what Allison said, I would've like to see more of your face & pose.
Amanda: I definitely see action here, there's no question of that. I love the setting, I love your shoes, I love what you're doing with this. But I have to agree with the others. Your face isn't that strong - yes, it is an action shot, so it isn't as costly as it normally would be - and your pose seems forced, rather than natural. Perhaps that's by virtue of some combination of the two and the way they mesh together. Maybe it also has something to do with the lighting or the slightly-below-average quality of the shot, which makes your face the way it is. It isn't a bad shot by any means, especially given the theme. Good job!
Twiggy: The Theme is here but the modeling aspect lacks a Little
Jessica
Allison: Ooo, I like this! This is very high fashion. You look like you're dancing and and I love the flowing of the dress. This was well done.
Jared: wow, unexpected, gorgeous
Twiggy: First, let me tell you what I don't like. I don't like the dress, it look like a plastic wrapping & I don't like the tension that I can see at your mouth area. Anyhow, I like your strong pose although to me it seems forceful and I love the movement. I would love to see a background to this too! Overall, you did good but it can be better.
Amanda: Okay, I have mixed feelings about this, and my mind is prisming in multiple directions. One, I love your movement and pose, and how elegant you are. Two, I like the effect your dress has, but I don't like that it looks like a trash bag. You're not Ke$ha. Three, I really like your face, your neck, and the way you're definitely modeling. Four, I wish your hair were longer here and moving like the dress, because that would be HAWT. Five, I don't like how this is cropped - I wish we could see more of your dress and your shoes! I love shoes, you know! And like Twiggy, I'd like a setting or some sort of story here. You're supposed to be moving - I mean, you are - but in a studio, it just seems weird. I like this, but I don't love it. Good job!
Jensen: I like this but like amanda i dont love it the exression is what bothers me is that there really isnt one
Selena
Allison: You're like the commercial version of my example photo. This is good, not great, but good. You look like you're having fun and you're clearly moving, it gives off a good energy. Overall, no complaints, except that I wish this had just a little bit more oomph to it.
Jared: Cute, quality a bit off but it's damn cute
Twiggy: I really like this. Its cute, lively and sweet. I can see the movement but I wish that you have a stronger pose.
Amanda: Yeah, this is VERY cute. It suits you extremely, extremely well. I love how your hair is bouncing and that smile is just delicious! I definitely see the movement, too - you're jumping. Like Allison said, it's very commercial, yet it's still a photoshoot (even if it is a bit casual...). I do wish we could see some shoes here - how it is makes it almost look like you're kneeling on some kind of invisible platform. I know an action shoot is very difficult, and you've at least nailed the energy and fun factor I look for and those are both very difficult to pull off. Overall, good work!
Jensen: This is Cute youve been a top Runner this Whole Competition and with that it doesnt really surprise me to see another good photo from you
Yoona
Allison: So, I know you struggled with this photoshoot... but I think there were a few pictures in your drafts that could have been better here. To me, this looks candid. You were on a run and someone got a picture of you. There's some modeling here but it's restricted... not your best week.
Jared: This is cute, borders a bit on candid, but i can get past that
Twiggy: I like this. I like the whole natural and fresh feeling I got from this photo, this could be an ad for a sport brand. But I agree that its borderline candid.
Amanda: Yeah, this definitely looks like some kind of candid or screencap from an ad. The biggest thing that emphasizes this is how it's cropped - it looks like it was taken extremely quickly, rather than being from a photoshoot. Given what you're wearing, it looks like if it is modeling, it's for a sporting goods company. Not that there's anything wrong with that - it's just that the modeling isn't as smexy as it could be, likely because the brand doesn't care as much about that. It's a very hard theme, after all - and this isn't horrific, at least. You ARE moving, you ARE enjoying yourself, and even though it's a rainy day (or cloudy), you still look good. That's hopefully good enough <3
Jensen: This definitely lacks in Modeling and looks very candid. But it is Action and that is what the theme is about
Emma
Allison: The strength in this photo is that there is a very clear action. That rope swing bench thingy looks hella fun and the theme is very there. But... that's about it for this photo. I'm not digging the pose, the face, everything else is weak.
Jared: This is cute and in action, nice job
Twiggy: I like the whole fun vibe I got from this photo, its energetic, it tells a story and definitely I can see the movement with the swing. But as what Allison said, I would've like to see more of your face & pose.
Amanda: I definitely see action here, there's no question of that. I love the setting, I love your shoes, I love what you're doing with this. But I have to agree with the others. Your face isn't that strong - yes, it is an action shot, so it isn't as costly as it normally would be - and your pose seems forced, rather than natural. Perhaps that's by virtue of some combination of the two and the way they mesh together. Maybe it also has something to do with the lighting or the slightly-below-average quality of the shot, which makes your face the way it is. It isn't a bad shot by any means, especially given the theme. Good job!
Twiggy: The Theme is here but the modeling aspect lacks a Little
Jessica
Allison: Ooo, I like this! This is very high fashion. You look like you're dancing and and I love the flowing of the dress. This was well done.
Jared: wow, unexpected, gorgeous
Twiggy: First, let me tell you what I don't like. I don't like the dress, it look like a plastic wrapping & I don't like the tension that I can see at your mouth area. Anyhow, I like your strong pose although to me it seems forceful and I love the movement. I would love to see a background to this too! Overall, you did good but it can be better.
Amanda: Okay, I have mixed feelings about this, and my mind is prisming in multiple directions. One, I love your movement and pose, and how elegant you are. Two, I like the effect your dress has, but I don't like that it looks like a trash bag. You're not Ke$ha. Three, I really like your face, your neck, and the way you're definitely modeling. Four, I wish your hair were longer here and moving like the dress, because that would be HAWT. Five, I don't like how this is cropped - I wish we could see more of your dress and your shoes! I love shoes, you know! And like Twiggy, I'd like a setting or some sort of story here. You're supposed to be moving - I mean, you are - but in a studio, it just seems weird. I like this, but I don't love it. Good job!
Jensen: I like this but like amanda i dont love it the exression is what bothers me is that there really isnt one
Selena
Allison: You're like the commercial version of my example photo. This is good, not great, but good. You look like you're having fun and you're clearly moving, it gives off a good energy. Overall, no complaints, except that I wish this had just a little bit more oomph to it.
Jared: Cute, quality a bit off but it's damn cute
Twiggy: I really like this. Its cute, lively and sweet. I can see the movement but I wish that you have a stronger pose.
Amanda: Yeah, this is VERY cute. It suits you extremely, extremely well. I love how your hair is bouncing and that smile is just delicious! I definitely see the movement, too - you're jumping. Like Allison said, it's very commercial, yet it's still a photoshoot (even if it is a bit casual...). I do wish we could see some shoes here - how it is makes it almost look like you're kneeling on some kind of invisible platform. I know an action shoot is very difficult, and you've at least nailed the energy and fun factor I look for and those are both very difficult to pull off. Overall, good work!
Jensen: This is Cute youve been a top Runner this Whole Competition and with that it doesnt really surprise me to see another good photo from you
Yoona
Allison: So, I know you struggled with this photoshoot... but I think there were a few pictures in your drafts that could have been better here. To me, this looks candid. You were on a run and someone got a picture of you. There's some modeling here but it's restricted... not your best week.
Jared: This is cute, borders a bit on candid, but i can get past that
Twiggy: I like this. I like the whole natural and fresh feeling I got from this photo, this could be an ad for a sport brand. But I agree that its borderline candid.
Amanda: Yeah, this definitely looks like some kind of candid or screencap from an ad. The biggest thing that emphasizes this is how it's cropped - it looks like it was taken extremely quickly, rather than being from a photoshoot. Given what you're wearing, it looks like if it is modeling, it's for a sporting goods company. Not that there's anything wrong with that - it's just that the modeling isn't as smexy as it could be, likely because the brand doesn't care as much about that. It's a very hard theme, after all - and this isn't horrific, at least. You ARE moving, you ARE enjoying yourself, and even though it's a rainy day (or cloudy), you still look good. That's hopefully good enough <3
Jensen: This definitely lacks in Modeling and looks very candid. But it is Action and that is what the theme is about
