Post by Allison Harvard on Apr 23, 2013 18:11:53 GMT -5
Welcome, ladies! 8 of you are here, but only 7 of you will be moving on. Let's see your critiques! Jensen did not critique but he did rank. 
Emma
Jared: Roller skating!!! I spent my whole teen years doing this EVERY Friday!!! Love it!!! So much fun!!!
Allison: I wish there had been an explanation so I could connect it better, but overall, I like this. I can tell you're having a lot of fun and really letting loose on a Friday night. I love that I can see the fun in your face, but it's a little bit uncontrolled- it's not very modelesque.
Twiggy: This is just okay to me. I hope to see a setting, background instead of studio shoot and I agree with Allison, this is not modelesque. Its like, you are just there.
Jessica
Allison: This is great, Jessica! Two things I don't like are: the quality, and that my attention briefly goes to the guy in front of you. But I can tell you are having a great time in a higher class club/resort, and you look fantastic. The pose is great, the dress if beautiful, I love the face- this was a great choice!
Jared: This is cute. The quality sucks, yes, but not too much. I love how much fun you're having. Not bad.
Twiggy: This is sad, I mean I know JA portfolio pretty well and this photo alone is all over the place with a lot better quality. To me, you are fading to the background a little bit but I appreciate the fact that you are having fun and trying to stand out, but it seems like it wasn't enough and its not popping to me.
JLaw
Jared: This is cute. As I got older we'd all go hang out at the parking lot with so many groups of people and all our cars. It was weird but fun lol You look gorgeous. I love your expression and how sexy you are.
Allison: In terms of theme interpretation, you and Jessica are exact opposites. She's at a higher class bar/club, you're in a sketchier part of town looking like a cute little sex kitten. You are very coy and sexy here, I really like this. You really are getting down and dirty on a Friday night, and this is a good photo.
Twiggy: talk about self improvement! Good job Jennifer. You are getting better and better. I think you finally got it, try not to lose it alright? You look cute here, I appreciate your fashion sense in this photo. Meow! My only issue is that, your butt look big (yummy!) I would want to spend my Friday night with you. You could do more with your legs, but this is good enough!
Katy
Allison: Are you sure this isn't Amy Winehouse? You look like Amy Winehouse.
-checking to see that you aren't Amy Winehouse-
Okay. You're not Amy Winehouse, but damn girl... i think it's the Amy lookalike thing that makes me connect this photo to a Friday night, but standing on it's own, it's not quite as strong. I do like how it seems like you're at maybe a Burlesque show, which can always be a fun way to spend Friday. I also love your eyes!
Jared: It was an Amy Winehouse photo shoot. She has a few like this. The quality sucks and I'm guessing you're at a Halloween party or impersonation event? You look amazing but I need more from you for this shoot.
Twiggy: I don't get it. A little explanation could help. Are you attending a celebrity look a like gathering every Friday night? This is not doing it for me.
Katy: Yeah, it's a celebrity get up for a special fund raising party for homeless LGBT youth
Keira
Jared: With weird things on your head? hahaha This is cool. I like the setting. I do not like those shoes, oh gawd take them off!!!! You look like you're part of an art design lol I like this a bit but not in love.
Allison: I love this round because you've all taken this different directions. You definitely seem like a high fashion socialite out visiting art shows, I do see a connection here to Friday. Go to any town's art district on a Friday and you'll see plenty of people, so good job! What I don't like is how you seem to be hugging yourself like yourself like you're scared, and your expression isn't great. Overall, this is good, but not great.
Twiggy: I appreciate the artistry of this photo. You fit right in the artsy/gallery/museum thing you are going with on Friday night. My only issue is, your face. You need to work on your expression. Overall, this is okay.
Selena
Allison: Friday night is usually party night, and what party isn't fun without balloons? The thematic concept is there. In terms of modelling, this isn't the strongest. It feels a little amateur, but it could be far worse. I don't think you should be worried
Jared: This is cute Selena. I hope I get invited to your party. The problem for me is quality, but guess what, you're like the 5th person so far with horrible quality so that's good for you. I feel like we'll have fun though.
Twiggy: This is cute & that's about it. I like the fact that you're having fun and interacting with the camera with your flirtatiousness smile and I would like to attend the same party you are going to.
Willa
Jared: Oh, ew. Gross. I'm sorry but that ashtray is really disgusting. I can't even get past it. Why would they do that to you? Ugh. the shoes are great. But ugh sorry
Allison: Oof. Clearly you partied hard... but yuck. I'm sending you to rehab. If this had been full body it could have been MUCH better... it does have potential. But, it's just not the best.
Twiggy: Where do I start? this is bad, really bad. Nothing about this photo is good.
Yoona
Allison: Yoona, this is amazing! I love this! I'm an avid camper so I definitely see the connection here. You look great, totally ready for the a fun campout... and you're actually wearing clothes that you would were when you go camping, not Carly Rae Jepsen style clothing... this is really good, by far my favorite.
Jared: Wow, you're really here to impress aren't you!!! The photo is so commercial. It's so stylish. The colouring is great. Your pose, your smile, your setting, your props. Great job!
Twiggy: You are rocking this competition right now, front runner, a force to be reckon with. The other girls should be worried right now. If they don't step it up, you are winning this game for sure. You are bringing it every single photo shoot! Great job. This probably is your best shoot thus far. Everything about this photo is spot on! Nothing to complain about. My issue with you is, I see you more of a commercial model rather than edgy/high fashion model. Would love to see that other side of you. Bravo! Lets go camping!
Emma
Jared: Roller skating!!! I spent my whole teen years doing this EVERY Friday!!! Love it!!! So much fun!!!
Allison: I wish there had been an explanation so I could connect it better, but overall, I like this. I can tell you're having a lot of fun and really letting loose on a Friday night. I love that I can see the fun in your face, but it's a little bit uncontrolled- it's not very modelesque.
Twiggy: This is just okay to me. I hope to see a setting, background instead of studio shoot and I agree with Allison, this is not modelesque. Its like, you are just there.
Jessica
Allison: This is great, Jessica! Two things I don't like are: the quality, and that my attention briefly goes to the guy in front of you. But I can tell you are having a great time in a higher class club/resort, and you look fantastic. The pose is great, the dress if beautiful, I love the face- this was a great choice!
Jared: This is cute. The quality sucks, yes, but not too much. I love how much fun you're having. Not bad.
Twiggy: This is sad, I mean I know JA portfolio pretty well and this photo alone is all over the place with a lot better quality. To me, you are fading to the background a little bit but I appreciate the fact that you are having fun and trying to stand out, but it seems like it wasn't enough and its not popping to me.
JLaw
Jared: This is cute. As I got older we'd all go hang out at the parking lot with so many groups of people and all our cars. It was weird but fun lol You look gorgeous. I love your expression and how sexy you are.
Allison: In terms of theme interpretation, you and Jessica are exact opposites. She's at a higher class bar/club, you're in a sketchier part of town looking like a cute little sex kitten. You are very coy and sexy here, I really like this. You really are getting down and dirty on a Friday night, and this is a good photo.
Twiggy: talk about self improvement! Good job Jennifer. You are getting better and better. I think you finally got it, try not to lose it alright? You look cute here, I appreciate your fashion sense in this photo. Meow! My only issue is that, your butt look big (yummy!) I would want to spend my Friday night with you. You could do more with your legs, but this is good enough!
Katy
Allison: Are you sure this isn't Amy Winehouse? You look like Amy Winehouse.
-checking to see that you aren't Amy Winehouse-
Okay. You're not Amy Winehouse, but damn girl... i think it's the Amy lookalike thing that makes me connect this photo to a Friday night, but standing on it's own, it's not quite as strong. I do like how it seems like you're at maybe a Burlesque show, which can always be a fun way to spend Friday. I also love your eyes!
Jared: It was an Amy Winehouse photo shoot. She has a few like this. The quality sucks and I'm guessing you're at a Halloween party or impersonation event? You look amazing but I need more from you for this shoot.
Twiggy: I don't get it. A little explanation could help. Are you attending a celebrity look a like gathering every Friday night? This is not doing it for me.
Katy: Yeah, it's a celebrity get up for a special fund raising party for homeless LGBT youth
Keira
Jared: With weird things on your head? hahaha This is cool. I like the setting. I do not like those shoes, oh gawd take them off!!!! You look like you're part of an art design lol I like this a bit but not in love.
Allison: I love this round because you've all taken this different directions. You definitely seem like a high fashion socialite out visiting art shows, I do see a connection here to Friday. Go to any town's art district on a Friday and you'll see plenty of people, so good job! What I don't like is how you seem to be hugging yourself like yourself like you're scared, and your expression isn't great. Overall, this is good, but not great.
Twiggy: I appreciate the artistry of this photo. You fit right in the artsy/gallery/museum thing you are going with on Friday night. My only issue is, your face. You need to work on your expression. Overall, this is okay.
Selena
Allison: Friday night is usually party night, and what party isn't fun without balloons? The thematic concept is there. In terms of modelling, this isn't the strongest. It feels a little amateur, but it could be far worse. I don't think you should be worried
Jared: This is cute Selena. I hope I get invited to your party. The problem for me is quality, but guess what, you're like the 5th person so far with horrible quality so that's good for you. I feel like we'll have fun though.
Twiggy: This is cute & that's about it. I like the fact that you're having fun and interacting with the camera with your flirtatiousness smile and I would like to attend the same party you are going to.
Willa
Jared: Oh, ew. Gross. I'm sorry but that ashtray is really disgusting. I can't even get past it. Why would they do that to you? Ugh. the shoes are great. But ugh sorry
Allison: Oof. Clearly you partied hard... but yuck. I'm sending you to rehab. If this had been full body it could have been MUCH better... it does have potential. But, it's just not the best.
Twiggy: Where do I start? this is bad, really bad. Nothing about this photo is good.
Yoona
Allison: Yoona, this is amazing! I love this! I'm an avid camper so I definitely see the connection here. You look great, totally ready for the a fun campout... and you're actually wearing clothes that you would were when you go camping, not Carly Rae Jepsen style clothing... this is really good, by far my favorite.
Jared: Wow, you're really here to impress aren't you!!! The photo is so commercial. It's so stylish. The colouring is great. Your pose, your smile, your setting, your props. Great job!
Twiggy: You are rocking this competition right now, front runner, a force to be reckon with. The other girls should be worried right now. If they don't step it up, you are winning this game for sure. You are bringing it every single photo shoot! Great job. This probably is your best shoot thus far. Everything about this photo is spot on! Nothing to complain about. My issue with you is, I see you more of a commercial model rather than edgy/high fashion model. Would love to see that other side of you. Bravo! Lets go camping!
