Post by Allison Harvard on Apr 12, 2013 22:28:52 GMT -5
Courteney- Interior Designer
Allison: I don't know, Courtney... I think you could have emphasized this a little more. You're standing in a kitchen, that makes me think "housewife" more than interior designer. You look cute, but this is just too boring for me.
Twiggy: I'm sorry Courteney, other than looking gorgeous; I'm not buying this. I know you can do better than this, however this week I think you have little to no connection with the theme. This is lame.
Jared: I see housewife as well. At first I thought you were doing to say chef because you're in a kitchen, but then I saw interior designer and you lost me. Your pose is nice and you look gorgeous, but there's no design to sell your job.
Jensen: There isn't really any connection to the theme in this photo and I like a lot of girls are going to have similar problems this week. The pose is nice but the biggest issue is theme connection
Emma- Aviator
Allison: Emma, this is gorgeous! I love this! You look chic and cute, and you nailed the aviator thing. You look like you're about to go flying on a high fashion airplane. Work on the angle of your face- you lost your neck and it looks a little painful. But aside from that, this is great- good job!
Twiggy: The only thing I absolutely HATE about this photo is the fact that we are missing your neck and you look like a freakin' turtle! But just like turtle, I know you can extend your neck and do wonders with it. Other than that, this is SPOT ON! Great job!
Jared: I really love this. The styling is good and reminds me of old fashioned aviators. The plane in the background is a great touch as well. This is really good and fun, great job.
Jensen: I really like this. I see the theme your going for and I like the stance and pose your in. I do agree you look like a Turtle. But if it works theme wise. You know what they say slow and steady wins the race
Hyorin- Police
Allison: This made me giggle, Hyorin- I definitely see a cop here, mainly in the hat. A full setting would have been nice instead of studio, but you look great- good job!
Twiggy: Just because you're wearing that hat, doesn't make you a police. I would love to see you in action rather than a studio shot of you looking at the camera. Are you about to cry? did anyone do anything bad to you? but overall, you look fantastic, good job for thinking outside of the box and I know you can do better than this!
Jared: Artistically, this is the best photo of the bunch. Your pose is great, your expression is soulful. I really love this photo on a whole. Cop though? That looks more like a biker hat. Your modeling is great though.
Jensen: The modeling is there but like the others the theme is weak. I do like the shot though but I'd of Lso preferred a action shot
Jessica- Trapeze Artist
Allison: This felt like a race against time, I was watching the clock to see if you would submit in time or not and you did... beat the deadline by a minute. Now, about the photo... I see that you're flying through the air, and you seem to be holding onto something, but that's where the theme ends. I'm not very into this, sadly.
Twiggy: Oh god! where do I start? this is underwhelmed. Your expression is bad, the outfit doesn't do you any favor and the way this photo is cropped is poor too. The only thing I like is your pose and I don't see the theme connection. You should feel sorry for yourself, you did way better previously and this is not Jessica that I become to know!
Jared: I love this photo. It was used in MMASM and it went over beautifully there. Placed second behind Dianna. This is more cropped to take out the swing, which is fine, although it might have helped you. I loved this photo before and I still love it. You're swinging in the air, you can see the chains and you're dressed as if you're putting on a show. Great job.
Update now that I have my power back. This is not the exact same photo that was used in MMASM. There are many differences. And when I said about the swing being cropped out, I definitely don't mean that you cropped it out. It's an obvious photographer choice. I still love this.
Jensen: I also love this photo and I definitely could see trapeze looking at it the expression does lag but the theme connection works for me
Jennifer- Zookeeper
Allison: Okay. Jennifer. You are getting better with the quality, modelling aspects, etc. but I really really wish this had been full body, it would have taken it from good to VERY good. I do see a zookeeper, more like a bird watcher, the theme is there but I think it could have been more fully realized. What I love is your eyes, I go straight to them, it's very alienesque in a good way.
Twiggy: This is way better than your previous photos, but still there's a lot more you can do than just standing there doing absolutely nothing. I like the connection you have with the camera and I at least buy this a zookeeper.
Jared: The quality is good, the modeling good, setting great, prop great. The photo is bordering on candid looking. I like this though.
Jensen: I like this also they've hit all the major improvement points. So ill just leave it as that lol
Katy- Girl Scout Leader
Allison: Awww, Katy, this is cute! You thought outside the box and I think it worked. This is a billion times better than last week, and I love how there's a fashion element to this. Careful with the face- you look a little bored. Much better, though!
Twiggy: Nice job Katy. I like the commercial value of this photo and you're modelling well. I also like the playfulness that you offer us this week, way to redeem yourself!
Jared: I don't think that's an occupation. This is spot on perfect for your choice. I love the styling and props. Your modeling is top notch. You look gorgeous. This even looks like an end of the runway pose, but we know it's not. I just don't see a job here. I love this though.
Jensen: I think an occupation is Definitely defined differently here but I like it. I'm not in love withit but its good
Keira- Dog Walker
Allison: Your face in this shot says a lot about this picture overall. I can tell you were trying to be frustrated in a model way, but here it looks like you forgot something at home and the dog won't turn around. I do love the pose, though- it's VERY high fashion, if the face had been better the whole thing would have been 10 x better. Then there's the quality... this is magazine scan type quality and it feels wonky. Not bad, though, overall!
Twiggy: I really don't know what to say, the poor quality have bring down the value of this photo. Kinda upset with your choice, there are a lot better quality photos in your draft. But other than that, I actually like this. This is so high fashion, a fashion model aka dog walker in the run!
Jared: The quality is awful and your expression is as well, but the rest is good. Obvious occupation here and you didnt' forget your fashion and your posing. Leg placements are awesome. NOt bad but not great
Jensen: There's a lot wrong with this photo. And a lot good with it. Unfortunately the question becomes does the good outweigh the bad in this
Reese- Circus Performer
Allison: This is cute, Reese. My problem is, I go directly to the elephant, not to you- you're being outshined by a pachyderm You clearly nailed the theme, though, so good job!
Twiggy: Your pose is boring, expression is dull and as what Allison said, you're out shined. But you nailed the theme anyway and I like the fact that I can see you as a circus performer.
Jared: This isn't bad. But it's not great. You're being outshined by the elephant, but at least you have an obvious job here. It's reminiscent of Stam's circus shot but she was high fashion and modeling.
Jensen: You always want to outshine the other people in your photo and peanut you did that this week the pose is there and I love the theme connect............. *jared whispers something in jensens ear* you mean we're not judging the elephant? Oh ummm could be stronger
Selena- Event Organizer
Allison: I don't know why, but now I'm dying for some cake. I see more cake decorator in here, kind of? This kind of his your career, but not as much as I would have liked. I like the pose, though, it's fierce!
Twiggy: This is just okay for me. It does not scream event planner to me, its a photo of you having fun at your own birthday. I like the flirtatiousness, pop of color and the dress but nothing but I don't see the theme connection.
Jared: I like this, it's cute. I don't really like the lighting of it though. But the rest is good. I see party planner because of the setting and the cake. I just wish the lighting wasn't so awful.
Jensen: I like this a lot. I see party planner. Or eve VIP cocktail waitress here
Willa- Sailor
Allison: Oof. I do see the theme here, you're on a boat sailing so good job there. I have to major problems with this photo, though- 1) the quality is off, and 2) your expression. If I had to guess, I would say that Willa Holland does not like boats because you look ready to cry right here.
Twiggy: This does not scream sailor to me, it look more to me like you are having a vacation & with that expression, you're not liking the boat or maybe you're have sea sickness. The only thing I like is the fashion value.
Jared: This is cute, the boat is there but the styling is not. The quality is off but you're modeling well. I'm on the fence with this one, but you're very cute.
Jensen: I am also on the fence I think you put out a good photo but it has little connection to the theme
Yoona- Lifeguard
Allison: I'm going to take back what I've been saying- I generally don't mind watermarks, but I really mind this one. It's distracting and a bit annoying so try and focus on keeping them out of the way this time. Now, aside from that... good job! You nailed the theme, and I really want to go to that water park. Your face is the biggest problem- it's dull. Not bad, though!
Twiggy: I'm officially a fan, you're again doing a good job this week. This time around, I don't mind the watermark, why? because everything else is spot on and that watermark is your name anyway! I like your pose & I think your expression is fierce! Keep it up!
Jared: Bravo! You're modeling, the quality is great, the fashion spot on for your theme and a great setting.
Jensen: I think the watermark is a distraction for me in this
Eliminations up shortly!
Allison: I don't know, Courtney... I think you could have emphasized this a little more. You're standing in a kitchen, that makes me think "housewife" more than interior designer. You look cute, but this is just too boring for me.
Twiggy: I'm sorry Courteney, other than looking gorgeous; I'm not buying this. I know you can do better than this, however this week I think you have little to no connection with the theme. This is lame.
Jared: I see housewife as well. At first I thought you were doing to say chef because you're in a kitchen, but then I saw interior designer and you lost me. Your pose is nice and you look gorgeous, but there's no design to sell your job.
Jensen: There isn't really any connection to the theme in this photo and I like a lot of girls are going to have similar problems this week. The pose is nice but the biggest issue is theme connection
Emma- Aviator
Allison: Emma, this is gorgeous! I love this! You look chic and cute, and you nailed the aviator thing. You look like you're about to go flying on a high fashion airplane. Work on the angle of your face- you lost your neck and it looks a little painful. But aside from that, this is great- good job!
Twiggy: The only thing I absolutely HATE about this photo is the fact that we are missing your neck and you look like a freakin' turtle! But just like turtle, I know you can extend your neck and do wonders with it. Other than that, this is SPOT ON! Great job!
Jared: I really love this. The styling is good and reminds me of old fashioned aviators. The plane in the background is a great touch as well. This is really good and fun, great job.
Jensen: I really like this. I see the theme your going for and I like the stance and pose your in. I do agree you look like a Turtle. But if it works theme wise. You know what they say slow and steady wins the race
Hyorin- Police
Allison: This made me giggle, Hyorin- I definitely see a cop here, mainly in the hat. A full setting would have been nice instead of studio, but you look great- good job!
Twiggy: Just because you're wearing that hat, doesn't make you a police. I would love to see you in action rather than a studio shot of you looking at the camera. Are you about to cry? did anyone do anything bad to you? but overall, you look fantastic, good job for thinking outside of the box and I know you can do better than this!
Jared: Artistically, this is the best photo of the bunch. Your pose is great, your expression is soulful. I really love this photo on a whole. Cop though? That looks more like a biker hat. Your modeling is great though.
Jensen: The modeling is there but like the others the theme is weak. I do like the shot though but I'd of Lso preferred a action shot
Jessica- Trapeze Artist
Allison: This felt like a race against time, I was watching the clock to see if you would submit in time or not and you did... beat the deadline by a minute. Now, about the photo... I see that you're flying through the air, and you seem to be holding onto something, but that's where the theme ends. I'm not very into this, sadly.
Twiggy: Oh god! where do I start? this is underwhelmed. Your expression is bad, the outfit doesn't do you any favor and the way this photo is cropped is poor too. The only thing I like is your pose and I don't see the theme connection. You should feel sorry for yourself, you did way better previously and this is not Jessica that I become to know!
Jared: I love this photo. It was used in MMASM and it went over beautifully there. Placed second behind Dianna. This is more cropped to take out the swing, which is fine, although it might have helped you. I loved this photo before and I still love it. You're swinging in the air, you can see the chains and you're dressed as if you're putting on a show. Great job.
Update now that I have my power back. This is not the exact same photo that was used in MMASM. There are many differences. And when I said about the swing being cropped out, I definitely don't mean that you cropped it out. It's an obvious photographer choice. I still love this.
Jensen: I also love this photo and I definitely could see trapeze looking at it the expression does lag but the theme connection works for me
Jennifer- Zookeeper
Allison: Okay. Jennifer. You are getting better with the quality, modelling aspects, etc. but I really really wish this had been full body, it would have taken it from good to VERY good. I do see a zookeeper, more like a bird watcher, the theme is there but I think it could have been more fully realized. What I love is your eyes, I go straight to them, it's very alienesque in a good way.
Twiggy: This is way better than your previous photos, but still there's a lot more you can do than just standing there doing absolutely nothing. I like the connection you have with the camera and I at least buy this a zookeeper.
Jared: The quality is good, the modeling good, setting great, prop great. The photo is bordering on candid looking. I like this though.
Jensen: I like this also they've hit all the major improvement points. So ill just leave it as that lol
Katy- Girl Scout Leader
Allison: Awww, Katy, this is cute! You thought outside the box and I think it worked. This is a billion times better than last week, and I love how there's a fashion element to this. Careful with the face- you look a little bored. Much better, though!
Twiggy: Nice job Katy. I like the commercial value of this photo and you're modelling well. I also like the playfulness that you offer us this week, way to redeem yourself!
Jared: I don't think that's an occupation. This is spot on perfect for your choice. I love the styling and props. Your modeling is top notch. You look gorgeous. This even looks like an end of the runway pose, but we know it's not. I just don't see a job here. I love this though.
Jensen: I think an occupation is Definitely defined differently here but I like it. I'm not in love withit but its good
Keira- Dog Walker
Allison: Your face in this shot says a lot about this picture overall. I can tell you were trying to be frustrated in a model way, but here it looks like you forgot something at home and the dog won't turn around. I do love the pose, though- it's VERY high fashion, if the face had been better the whole thing would have been 10 x better. Then there's the quality... this is magazine scan type quality and it feels wonky. Not bad, though, overall!
Twiggy: I really don't know what to say, the poor quality have bring down the value of this photo. Kinda upset with your choice, there are a lot better quality photos in your draft. But other than that, I actually like this. This is so high fashion, a fashion model aka dog walker in the run!
Jared: The quality is awful and your expression is as well, but the rest is good. Obvious occupation here and you didnt' forget your fashion and your posing. Leg placements are awesome. NOt bad but not great
Jensen: There's a lot wrong with this photo. And a lot good with it. Unfortunately the question becomes does the good outweigh the bad in this
Reese- Circus Performer
Allison: This is cute, Reese. My problem is, I go directly to the elephant, not to you- you're being outshined by a pachyderm You clearly nailed the theme, though, so good job!
Twiggy: Your pose is boring, expression is dull and as what Allison said, you're out shined. But you nailed the theme anyway and I like the fact that I can see you as a circus performer.
Jared: This isn't bad. But it's not great. You're being outshined by the elephant, but at least you have an obvious job here. It's reminiscent of Stam's circus shot but she was high fashion and modeling.
Jensen: You always want to outshine the other people in your photo and peanut you did that this week the pose is there and I love the theme connect............. *jared whispers something in jensens ear* you mean we're not judging the elephant? Oh ummm could be stronger
Selena- Event Organizer
Allison: I don't know why, but now I'm dying for some cake. I see more cake decorator in here, kind of? This kind of his your career, but not as much as I would have liked. I like the pose, though, it's fierce!
Twiggy: This is just okay for me. It does not scream event planner to me, its a photo of you having fun at your own birthday. I like the flirtatiousness, pop of color and the dress but nothing but I don't see the theme connection.
Jared: I like this, it's cute. I don't really like the lighting of it though. But the rest is good. I see party planner because of the setting and the cake. I just wish the lighting wasn't so awful.
Jensen: I like this a lot. I see party planner. Or eve VIP cocktail waitress here
Willa- Sailor
Allison: Oof. I do see the theme here, you're on a boat sailing so good job there. I have to major problems with this photo, though- 1) the quality is off, and 2) your expression. If I had to guess, I would say that Willa Holland does not like boats because you look ready to cry right here.
Twiggy: This does not scream sailor to me, it look more to me like you are having a vacation & with that expression, you're not liking the boat or maybe you're have sea sickness. The only thing I like is the fashion value.
Jared: This is cute, the boat is there but the styling is not. The quality is off but you're modeling well. I'm on the fence with this one, but you're very cute.
Jensen: I am also on the fence I think you put out a good photo but it has little connection to the theme
Yoona- Lifeguard
Allison: I'm going to take back what I've been saying- I generally don't mind watermarks, but I really mind this one. It's distracting and a bit annoying so try and focus on keeping them out of the way this time. Now, aside from that... good job! You nailed the theme, and I really want to go to that water park. Your face is the biggest problem- it's dull. Not bad, though!
Twiggy: I'm officially a fan, you're again doing a good job this week. This time around, I don't mind the watermark, why? because everything else is spot on and that watermark is your name anyway! I like your pose & I think your expression is fierce! Keep it up!
Jared: Bravo! You're modeling, the quality is great, the fashion spot on for your theme and a great setting.
Jensen: I think the watermark is a distraction for me in this
Eliminations up shortly!
